Tuesday, January 3, 2012

Poetic Form: Renga  


Renga, meaning "linked poem," began over seven hundred years ago in Japan to encourage the collaborative composition of poems. Poets worked in pairs or small groups, taking turns composing the alternating three-line and two-line stanzas. Linked together, renga were often hundreds of lines long, though the favored length was a 36-line form called a kasen. Several centuries after its inception, the opening stanza of renga gave rise to the much shorter haiku.
To create a renga, one poet writes the first stanza, which is three lines long with a total of seventeen syllables. The next poet adds the second stanza, a couplet with seven syllables per line. The third stanza repeats the structure of the first and the fourth repeats the second, alternating in this pattern until the poem’s end.
Thematic elements of renga are perhaps most crucial to the poem’s success. The language is often pastoral, incorporating words and images associated with seasons, nature, and love. In order for the poem to achieve its trajectory, each poet writes a new stanza that leaps from only the stanza preceding it. This leap advances both the thematic movement as well as maintaining the linking component.
Contemporary practitioners of renga have eased the form’s traditional structural standards, allowing poets to adjust line-length, while still offering exciting and enlightening possibilities. The form has become a popular method for teaching students to write poetry while working together.
 

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A Solo Renga by Jane Reichhold

Failing a drum
heart and fingers beat
rib-laced hollow


filled and overflowing
the flute empties its notes


mountain breathing
noon heat shimmers
cool from crevices


pattern of dry river weaving
brown gray snake skin


wearing feathers
the messenger braves the cold
moonlight owl


first the fear and then the power
seeing shadows stretch the night


whip-tailed
the scorpion untouched
by its own poison


babies in her wolfish belly
which one will kill her?


when old and lame 
the wise woman knows best
the grace of dancing


prayers stir the dusty earth
bells set the air to jingling


no one speaks 
the body begins to tremble
the burn and salve


electric fingers light the way
to collect the boji stones


the travelers 
without wings
plain


gauzy gowns long gone
angels now wear T-shirts


neon advertising 
someone else's name
on your chest


lost on the threshold
first step in the labyrinth


the map 
in your hand
lines


the curve of latitude
and longitude meeting


the star 
in the apple's center
seed distance


capsules of sunshine darken
taking the shape of tears


mad with love 
only sea skin fabrics
cloth the depths


full of fishes worms and worries
we walk the aisles of grocery stores


woman 
chanting to the goddess
tiny banners of blood


tying us together we cry
breached beseeched at childbirth


human sacrifice 
helmet and gun in empty shoes
of a soldier son


shell home at last
the hermit crab slips in


moonset 
the sea recedes 
into a bright hole

white ash circles the embers
of the all-night vigil


eyes red-rimmed 
staring at nothing to see
the dream


leaving three hairs braided
in the cedar a thank-you note


from the flute 
breath, blessing and perfume
of warmed wood


manifesting in the fog 
pyramids of slanted sun

the lens disk 
focused as close as 
we come to stars

sisters hand in hand 
with rainbow brothers

the music fades 
the lights come up
and credits roll


inside the darkness of night
all the things we are.

Copyright © by AHA Books and Jane Reichhold 1995.
Copyright © by Designated Authors 1995.

 



 



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