Poetic Form: Renga
|
|
|
|
Renga, meaning "linked poem," began over seven hundred years ago
in Japan to encourage the collaborative composition of poems. Poets
worked in pairs or small groups, taking turns composing the alternating
three-line and two-line stanzas. Linked together, renga were often
hundreds of lines long, though the favored length was a 36-line form
called a kasen. Several centuries after its inception, the opening stanza of renga gave rise to the much shorter haiku.
To create a renga, one poet writes the first stanza, which is three
lines long with a total of seventeen syllables. The next poet adds the
second stanza, a couplet with seven syllables per line. The third stanza
repeats the structure of the first and the fourth repeats the second,
alternating in this pattern until the poem’s end.
Thematic elements of renga are perhaps most crucial to the poem’s
success. The language is often pastoral, incorporating words and images
associated with seasons, nature, and love. In order for the poem to
achieve its trajectory, each poet writes a new stanza that leaps from
only the stanza preceding it. This leap advances both the thematic
movement as well as maintaining the linking component.
Contemporary practitioners of renga have eased the form’s traditional
structural standards, allowing poets to adjust line-length, while still
offering exciting and enlightening possibilities. The form has become a
popular method for teaching students to write poetry while working
together. |
|
|
|
36 Views
A Solo Renga by Jane Reichhold
Failing a drum heart and fingers beat rib-laced
hollow
filled and overflowing the flute empties its notes
mountain breathing noon heat shimmers cool from
crevices
pattern of dry river weaving brown gray snake skin
wearing feathers the messenger braves the
cold moonlight owl
first the fear and then the power seeing shadows
stretch the night
whip-tailed the scorpion untouched by its own
poison
babies in her wolfish belly which one will kill
her?
when old and lame
the wise woman knows best the
grace of dancing
prayers stir the dusty earth bells set the air to
jingling
no one speaks
the body begins to tremble the burn
and salve
electric fingers light the way to collect the boji
stones
the travelers
without wings plain
gauzy gowns long gone angels now wear T-shirts
neon advertising
someone else's name on your
chest
lost on the threshold first step in the labyrinth
the map
in your hand lines
the curve of latitude and longitude meeting
the star
in the apple's center seed distance
capsules of sunshine darken taking the shape of
tears
mad with love
only sea skin fabrics cloth the
depths
full of fishes worms and worries we walk the aisles of
grocery stores
woman
chanting to the goddess tiny banners of
blood
tying us together we cry breached beseeched at
childbirth
human sacrifice
helmet and gun in empty shoes of a
soldier son
shell home at last the hermit crab slips in
moonset
the sea recedes
into a bright hole
white ash circles the embers of the all-night
vigil
eyes red-rimmed
staring at nothing to see the
dream
leaving three hairs braided in the cedar a thank-you
note
from the flute
breath, blessing and perfume of
warmed wood
manifesting in the fog
pyramids of slanted sun
the lens disk
focused as close as
we come to
stars
sisters hand in hand
with rainbow brothers
the music fades
the lights come up and credits
roll
inside the darkness of night all the things we
are.
Copyright © by AHA Books and Jane Reichhold
1995. Copyright © by Designated Authors 1995. |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
No comments:
Post a Comment